Friday, October 17, 2014

A Naughty Excerpt from Maid to Submit by Sue Lyndon

I'm very happy to have Sue Lyndon on my blog today with an excerpt from her first self published piece, Maid to Submit! I don't know about you but I pre-ordered it on the day it was available, just started it last night and it's just what I expect from a Sue Lyndon book: hot hot hot! The excerpt is a naughty on, as expected when it's Sue, right? Here she is...

My new release, Maid to Submit, is now available on Amazon for 99 cents. Maid to Submit is a naughty Halloween-themed short story and it’s my first self-published venture, so I am pretty darn excited about it. If you have Amazon Prime or Kindle Unlimited, you can even read it for free!


Maid to Submit is a short story of approximately 8,000 words.

Ally's all dressed up and eager to spend Halloween night with her spanko boyfriend, Mark, but on her way out the door her roommate regretfully informs her that she saw Mark having lunch with another woman. Ally's heartbroken, but she's also angry...angry enough to hurl toilet paper through all the trees in front of Mark's house, among other naughty things. She doesn't plan on being caught red-handed, but she soon finds herself being tossed over Mark's shoulder and carried into his house.

Mark insists they talk about whatever has Ally so upset, and if he has to hold her captive--or spank her--until she settles down enough to listen, so be it. He informs a stunned Ally that the busty blonde he had lunch with was...his mother! Now he's got his hands full with an apologetic French maid who is very much in need of correction. He's understanding that Ally has some trust issues because of her past, but he certainly won't tolerate such naughty, irresponsible behavior from the woman he loves. He informs her that she's to endure a thorough inspection followed by a hard spanking on her bare bottom, and that's just the beginning of her punishment.

Will Mark get his errant maid to submit to an ordeal that is sure to leave her blushing?

Note: This story contains a naughty French maid who looks good in handcuffs, a no-nonsense firefighter with a twitchy palm, bare bottom spankings galore, and other erotic scenes sure to make your e-reader sizzle. Please don't buy this book if such material offends you.


“I can smell your arousal, Ally. I know you’re wet. Now, let’s see just how wet you are.”
She gasped as the cool air hit her most private places. He knelt behind her and gripped her cheeks, one in each hand, and parted her bottom wide in an uncomfortable stretch. At first he simply kept her spread open, not yet delving into her moisture. The pause during which she was on display, his hot breath fanning against her slick pussy lips and quivering bottom hole, left her clawing at the wall as she fought to remain in position.
“I can see all of you right now, Ally girl. Your slick pussy lips and the wet, pinkness within. Your tight puckering hole. There’s even a drop of moisture sliding down your thigh right now, young lady.”
A heated wave stole through her, and her shame over being inspected so thoroughly, so intimately, caused the aching below her waist to turn into a full blown throbbing sensation.
“And these panties,” he said in a scolding tone. “These panties are so wet that you won’t be able to wear them again.”
“I-I’m sorry, sir.”
He released her bottom and tapped the side of her leg. “Remove your stockings and panties, Ally. Then bend over the bed and pull your bottom cheeks apart, young lady. I’m not through inspecting your holes yet.”
She nodded with a whimper and began to comply with his demands, her hands trembling as she worked the stockings down her legs. Her panties pooled at her feet as she stood upright, and she pushed them away into a pile with everything else. A deep sense of vulnerability filled her as she approached the bed with her head lowered. From the corner of her eye, she glimpsed Mark’s massive form and swallowed hard when she noticed his arms folded over his chest. Though she didn’t look up far enough to see his eyes, she knew his gaze was fixated on her every movement.
“Good girl,” he said as she bent over. “Now reach back and pull those naughty cheeks apart, Ally.”

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Author bio: Sue Lyndon is a multi-published author of erotic BDSM romance and spanking romances. She enjoys a good book in any genre, loves Star Trek and Battlestar Galactica, and runs on coffee and chocolate.


Roz said...

Oh gaud, that was such a hot snippet Sue, I think I just combusted! LoL. Congratulations on the release!

Thanks for hosting Natasha :)


Sue Lyndon said...

Thanks for having me, Natasha! :)

Sue Lyndon said...

Thank you, Roz! :)

Cara Bristol said...

Read it. Maid to Submit is a hot little story!

Frank Loher said...

TY Cara Love reading your stories XX