Friday, July 18, 2014

A Public Caning: Sci Spanks Anthology is Here! #satspanks


Good morning Saturday spankers! The Sci Spanks Anthology has just been published this week containing unique stories from fifteen authors, including yours truly! :) Here are eight sentences from my contribution, A Public Caning:

The guards stepped back and we all had a view of the young girls bottom spread before us, the pink lips of her sex trembling, her dark back hole just visible between her cheeks. Foreman, as he was known, the man who would dole out the punishment, took his place and swung the cane through the air once, the whippy sound silencing the crowd, calling a cry from the waiting girl's lips. The bulge in his pants was obvious to any who cared to spare a glance.


Without ceremony, he raised his arm and the cane hung there as if frozen in time. I did not breathe a single breath as it whooshed through the air and made contact with the center of the girl's bottom. She didn't make a sound at first, no one did. In fact, it was silent for what seemed an eternity before the stripe began to color and the bent girl made a desperate noise. I saw Foreman's lips quiver and, as he applied the next strokes, watched how his cock swelled. I'd not seen many men who enjoyed their work so much as he did.




14 comments:

Cara Bristol said...

Powerfully written. Great job, Natasha!

Normandie Alleman said...

Yes, very vivid imagery and you make us curious about Foreman and what the poor girl did to deserve a caning.

Casey McKay said...

Describing quivering cheeks and dark back holes... all before lunch! This is why we're friends...

PK Corey said...

Makes my mouth dry. Great snippet.

Jolynn Raymond said...

Goodness that was intense. I love the line about the foreman's lips quivering. We are left to guess, but I'm sure a smile is not far to come. He does indeed enjoy his work. Wonderful imagery.

Tara Finnegan said...

Your descriptions are wonderful, so visual. So tense.

Leigh Smith said...

I feel as if I am right there with them, like a fly on the wall. Great.

Ashe Barker said...

Evocative writing, I'm right there, drinking in the atmosphere. Great snippet

Megan Michaels said...

Absolutely amazing! You definitely feel like you are right there. Well Done!!

Trent Evans said...

Just picked it up:) I love that cover. It's worth buying simply for Natasha's smoking hot story alone!

Katherine Deane said...

that was awesome, Natasha! I read the whole scene during Sci Spanks, and it was amazing!!!
Congrats!

Constance Masters said...

So descriptive. Wonderful snippet Natasha :)

Renee Rose said...

I loved this story!

Adaline Raine said...

Very intense! I like it. :)